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Duquin

Duquin
Hello all! This months NPC Jam will be specifically geared towards the creation of Captains and Vice Captains of the Gotei 13. Future jams will focus on the Espada and Esper, but for now lets focus on the Gotei 13!

All players who create an NPC that is approved as a Captain or Vice Captain will be allowed to gain 1 free technique or item from the character they made! OR do a tier up training thread with the NPC with only HALF the normal word/post requirements!

- The technique/item still needs to get approved in the creation area before you can obtain it.

- The technique or item MUST be gained IC, however there is no word count or paragraph requirement. So have fun with the thread in which you do so! This thread can be a solo rp or you can have someone else rp the NPC. It's up to you.

- This prize is only redeemable once per person, but multiple submissions are encouraged!

- If your NPC is not selected for a captain or vice captain position, you may re-submit them for a second try! The time limit is until October.

How To Participate?

Step 1 - Fill out the NPC Template below and post it in this thread.

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[color=#CDAD00][b]Name:[/b][/color]
[color=#CDAD00][b]Alias:[/b][/color]
[color=#CDAD00][b]Age:[/b][/color]
[color=#CDAD00][b]Age of Appearance:[/b][/color]
[color=#CDAD00][b]Gender:[/b][/color]
[color=#CDAD00][b]Race/Species:[/b][/color](Arrancar/Hollow, Shinigami, etc. Species; this applies for people like Komamura(The fox-man captain) and any other 'unique' animal/human hybrid)
[color=#CDAD00][b]Character Alignment:[/b][/color](Good, Evil, Neutral? Tell us where you stand!)
[color=#CDAD00][b]Division:[/b][/color] What Division is the character in?
[color=#CDAD00][b]Position:[/b][/color] What position do you think they should hold? Captain? Vice Captain? 3rd Seat?
[color=#CDAD00][u][b]Appearance:[/b][/u][/color] (What does you character look like? All you need is a picture! Be sure to give the artist credit)


[color=#CDAD00][u][b]Personality:[/b][/u][/color] (What is your character like? How do they behave while in combat? Around others? When alone? Do they enjoy fighting? Are they a pacifist? Aim for at least 2-3 paragraphs here, us mods want to be able to get a feel for how your character would act, etc when we read the app.)


[color=#CDAD00][u][b]Role Suggestions:[/b][/u][/color] (Do you think this character would work best as an org leader? Maybe you feel it should only be used for social threads. Suggest what role you think would work best for the character here. Also place any other comments or suggestions for them such as what kind of powers they should have or anything else you think we should know.)
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Step 2 - Wait for staff to post a verdict on whether or not the character is approved for the position.

How Will Captains/Vice Captains Be Chosen?

These NPCs aren't JUST supposed to be strong or cool leaders. They need to be written in such a way that almost anyone could use the NPC in a thread which means super quirky personalities might not be the best fit. But at the same time, they should stand out and be unique in one way or another. They should also fit the Division they were made for. A pacifist shouldn't be in the 11th division and a dunce at kidou shouldn't be in the kidou corps.

If you decide to add abilities, techniques, or release information to these NPCs, the best way to ensure approval is to give them powers which help their rolls as mentors. This means abilities which help other rpers with training in some way or techniques which can be used to help mentor other characters.

The amount of work required is only the minimum for normal NPCs, but putting in extra work will only help your chances. If a character is not approved as a captain or VC they will be assigned another rank until September ends or they are resubmitted.

Granted, these are fairly vague standards. Whether or not your character is approved for a Captain or Vice Captain spot is left up to staffs judgement. We'll be trying our best to ensure that the characters approved for these spots will be beneficial to the forum as useful plot and rp tools.

Durza

Durza
NPC Template




Eleventh Division Captain, Jinsuke Kenpachi;
Slaughterer of a Thousand Men






September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Cpt1110







    Name: Jinsuke Kenpachi
    Alias: Slaughterer of a Thousand Men (千人斬り Sennin giri)
    Age: Roughly 900-1000 years old.
    Age of Appearance: Mid-forties +
    Gender: Male
    Race/Species: Shinigami
    Character Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Division: Eleventh
    Position: Captain
    Appearance:
    Credit to: abuamin32 @ DeviantArt
    Click for Appearance

    Sealed Zanpakuto Appearance:
    The sealed form of Yūgasurōtā appears to be a plain katana, with a blade length of roughly 28.5". The wrap upon the handle of the Zanpakuto is colored a dark red, almost maroon color. The blades scabbard seems to be wooden, and is colored a simple black. Yūgasurōtā is worn on Jinsuke's left hip along with a plain katana that looks identical too the Zanpakuto.

    Zanpakuto Name: Yūgasurōtā (Graceful Slaughter)
    Zanpakuto Element: Blood & Metal, specificly Iron.
    Shikai Appearance:
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    Bankai Appearance:
    Click Here

    Personality:
    The Greatest Swordsman
    Although already named as the current Kenpachi, Jinsuke feels the need for more. The near thousand year old Shinigami believes he has yet to become the greatest swordsman in the afterlife. Due too this Jinsuke seeks stronger & stronger foes in hopes of one day encountering stronger swordsmen with the goal to prove themselves as well. Due to this goal of his Jinsuke holds the utmost respect for other swordsman, be they human, Shinigami, or Hollow.

    Calm & Confident
    Outside of combat Jinsuke has an aura of confidence about him. One that speaks of his power, past deeds, and his standing within the Gotei. Although Jinsuke has a great air of confidence about him, one should not mistake it for arrogance. In addition to the air of confidence Jinsuke displays, there is also the endless calm that always seems to possess the man. Said calmness about him is almost eerie in a sense, as if everything were already plotted out for him and there was absolutely nothing to worry about.

    Blood-Lust Beneath the Surface
    Normally, unless one knew Jinsuke's alias they wouldn't expect much blood-lust from him. Unfortunately this is where such a person would be completely wrong. Just beneath the surface of Jinsuke's persona lies an immense, almost unsatable blood-lust. While the man doesn't show it, he practically lives for the carnage of combat, the terror of his foes, the blood upon the battleground and his own flesh. When it comes to combat, outside of facing another swordsman, Jinsuke is completely sadistic, enjoying every bit of carnage, pain, and terror he's able to inflict upon his foe. If it weren't for his loyalty towards the Gotei no one in his path would espace the blood-lust he hides within. Finally, over the years Jinsuke has learned how to channel his blood-lust, allowing it too heighten things like his senses, reaction time, and pain threshold.

    Loyal, Yet Chaotic
    Loyalty... The only thing that commands such a thing from Jinsuke would be the Gotei 13. Not because of their goals or outlooks, but because of the sheer power the organization could hold, and does hold. It only helps that within the Gotei are those that are even more powerful than Jinsuke himself.

    Although loyal to the Gotei as a whole, there are few within that command the loyalty of one Jinsuke Kenpachi. Most of them are other Captains, those with more power than he, and finally his own Division. In battle, it was quickly learned that if one wanted to stay unharmed by Jinsuke, even though being fellow Shinigami, they best hold his respect. There have been many instances in which Jinsuke has cut down fellow Shinigami simply because they were in his way and he felt no loyalty to them, though this isn't to say all of them have ended up dead.

    The Glutton
    When he isn't fighting, flirting, or sleeping around Jinsuke is eating, and drinking. If there's one thing Jinsuke loves as much as a fight between himself & another swordsman, it's sitting down with some drink & food. In fact, Jinsuke enjoys his food & drink so much he made sure that the Eleventh Division had daily feasts involving as much as the Division could eat & drink.

    Role Suggestions:

    Jinsuke's role, first and foremost is the current Kenpachi. The strongest swordsmen alive. In addition to this role I would like Jinsuke to command the Eleventh Division for several reasons, including his skills when unarmed & with the blade, his blood-thirst, and his loyalty to the Gotei.

    Originally the Gotei had enlisted Jinsuke due to the risk of leaving him unwatched in Rukongai after his slaughter of 1000+ men in less than 24 hours. Upon enlisting Jinsuke he was quickly thrown to the wolves of the Eleventh division, where his blood-lust, and skill could be used. It would be many years later, after achieving his Shikai that Jinsuke would become the new Kenpachi. A few years later Jinsuke would become the first Captain whom lacked a Bankai, although this would be remedied in the next hundred years.

    At his current age of 900-1000 years old, Jinsuke is easily one of the most powerful members of the Gotei, in addition to both the fear & respect he commands.

    Note: Although I've added elements, Zanpakuto name, & appearances, the rest(techniques, abilities, spirit, inner world, etc) is up too whomever uses the character.

#3September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Empty WIP WIP WIP Fri Sep 20, 2013 10:24 pm

Erida Seika

Erida Seika



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"The archsage of shinigami, commander of the corps''
"The greater grandmaster of kido, eldest of all captains"


September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Archsa10


"NPC; Sēji Tsukino"



Basic Information


    Name: Sēji Tsukino [roughly translated. Sage of moon, though the 'no'-word should be in front of the 'tsuki']
    Alias: Maybe because being so old, Sēji has been known with many different names, but the most notable of them is, almost the same as his name, Sēji no Kanzen'na Mūn, Sage of the Complete Moon.
    Age: Rumored to be between 2000-3000 years, no excact information.
    Age of Appearance: Sēji is in later sixties.
    Gender: Male, most obviously.
    Race/Species: Shinigami
    Character Alignment: Sēji is often considered as kind-hearted man, who acts as father figure to many shinigami. He is lawful good, who avoids violence, however, does not hesistate to fight if threat is spotted.


Shinigami Information


    Position: Commander
    Division: Kido Corps
    Shihakusho: Sēji wears the shihakusho normally, and has no modifications in it, however, his captain haori is dark blue.


Zanpakuto Information


Zanpakuto Name: Terasu, Shirotsuki [照らす白い月, lit. ''Illuminate, White Moon'']
Sealed Appearance:
Zanpakuto Elements:

Appearance: Credit to Zanpakuto-Leader from deviantART

Click me for an image.

Combat Skills: WIP

Personality: WIP

Role Suggestions: WIP

Combat Information

    ''Overhelming Spiritual Power''


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    ''Grandmaster-Level Kido Specialist''


Forbidden Kido; Chōbatsu

Execution Kido; Shizai-ken

Binding Kido; Tamashī Kēji

    ''Master Swordmanship Specialist''


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    ''Expert Flash Step Practioner''


Jikkō

Chōyaku

    ''Master of Reishi Manipulation''


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Duquin

Duquin
Liking the submissions so far. Keep em up guys!

Durza

Durza
Just want to confirm something before I start this next NPC, are we allowed to make an NPC for the Captain Commander position? Or will that be something staff does?

Duquin

Duquin
You may, but you'd have to keep the captain commanders roll for the plot in mind for it to be considered. For now, if you do make one, design him so you could easily fit him to captain of another division in the event something else is chosen for the captain commander.

Durza

Durza
Alright that I can do, especially since the idea(s) I have for a CC could also work for Divisions 2 or 4. Thanks for the awesomely quick answer Smile

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Anonymous
Guest
NPC Template




Identity of a Soul







    Name: Hayabusa Kasai
    Alias: The White Fury, Sky Eyes, The Fedora, Gunslinger, White Blazer, The Noudoka
    Age: 876
    Age of Appearance: 30s
    Gender: Male
    Race/Species: Shinigami
    Character Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Division: Division 12
    Position: Captain
    Appearance:
    September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Bleach_oc__captain_kasai_by_onyx_vx-d3lmvzc
    Credit to Onyx Vx


    Personality: Hayabusa is the eccentric man that leads the 12th Division. He is a sarcastic and condescending man towards anyone who isn't as intelligent or strong as himself. He pokes fun at his subordinates mistakes, thus making them feel bad. Dealing with insubordination can be considered as overly harsh since the punishment never fits the crime. Though he is a cruel man, he is very intelligent and has invented many things for the Gotei 13. It is perhaps the only reason why they keep him around, since it would be a waste to get rid of someone that produces many useful devices for them, even if he's cruel to his subordinates.

    Hayabusa is merely cruel to cover up the fact that he does care about his squad, an emotion he deems to be a weakness. He's tough on his squad to make them better, but his way of wording things are always too harsh. He has a respect towards the one that outranks him, and to those who are far more intelligent and powerful than himself. Hayabusa does have moments were he praises his squad or a single individual, but those are few.


    Role Suggestions: Hayabusa intended role would be head of the 12th Division. He creates many inventions for the Gotei 13, whilst conducting experiments in private.

#9September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Empty W.I.P Sun Sep 22, 2013 11:34 pm

Durza

Durza
*Note: This particular NPC may, or may not take a while depending how in-depth I go with it.

NPC Template(W.I.P)




Captain Commander of the Gotei 13, & Captain of the First Division;
Seijin 'The Divine Healer'





September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Hqdefault
Seijin halting the strike of a student long past, with what appears to be a simple touch of his finger touching the students fist.






    Name: Seijin
    Alias: Captain Commander, Captain, The Divine Healer, The Grandmaster.
    Age: Unknown. As far as Seijin's memory can serve, he has lived at least 2500 years. Though he has further estimated that he's lived roughly 3000-4500 years given that in the earliest memories he can recall, his physical appearance is that of a middle-aged adult.
    Age of Appearance: Elderly(70's+)
    Gender: Male
    Race/Species: Shinigami
    Character Alignment: Lawful Good / Lawful Neutral
    Division: First
    Position: Captain Commander & Captain of the 1st Division.
    Appearance:
    Click for Picture


    Personality:

    Wise Man

    Compassionate

    Family Orientated

    Sinister

    Perfectionist

    One Man's Hope


    Basic Combat Data:

    Immense Spiritual Energy: -----

      Perfect Reiatsu Control: -----


    Grandmaster Healer: Age, knowledge, practice, interest, and his Zanpakuto's organic affinity have allowed Seijin to become the best healer within Soul Society. too this date Seijin has never lost a patient in his care. Seijin's skills withing healing branch from his knowledge of natural remedies, medical knowledge lost in the ages, healing kido, and essentially any other field within healing of ones body or mind.

    Kido Master: Over his lifetime Seijin has mastered every aspect of Kido that he possibly could, and eventually he had learned everything there was to learn. Seijin can use all the incantation classes with masterful ease, though due to his perfect reiatsu control, it isn't often Seijin actually needs to utilize an incantation. Seijn is able to use all Kido up to the high seventies at full strength, without incantation.

    *note: Essentially the last three sections are going to be the same. It's all a matter of age, knowledge, his drive for perfection, and centuries upon centuries of time to train his skills. It'd be quite tiresome to basically type the same thing three more times, with little re-wording based around the specific skill. If it is wished for me to fill them out, I shall, otherwise all the factors for such skill in each field are discussed(age, knowledge, etc).

    Hakuda/Martial Arts Grandmaster:

    Kenjutsu Master:

    Shunpo Master:

    Sealed Zanpakuto:
    September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Musashi_Asuka_Tanto_Red

    Zanpakuto Spirit:
    spirit:
    Zanpakuto Name: Senju miko (Thousand Hand Priestess)
    Zanpakuto Element:
    Organic:
    Basic Concept:

    Mental:
    Basic Concept:
    Shikai Appearance:
    September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! 7_swords__nuibari_by_okojouchiha_by_midnightuchiha1-d5qh8t9

    Bankai Appearance: The appearance of Senju Miko's Bankai is completely unknown to the current Gotei 13 & the rest of Soul Society. This is in part due to Seijin's age, and thus how long ago he obtained it, and the fact that Seijin has never been forced to use it. It is widely known that the last time Seijin used his Bankai was roughly two to three thousand years ago.

    Role Suggestions: Captain Commander, otherwise Captain of the Forth Division. When it comes to Seijin's bonds with the rest of the Gotei, he see's them as his children, nieces, etc, all who serve him are a piece of the puzzle that is his family.

    Unlike many, if not most Shinigami, Seijin hopes to one day somehow unite the worlds, while keeping the balance. Of course in his age, and experience he knows such a thing would never occur, at least not perfectly. Part of why Seijin is so well respected within Soul Society is because of his views of the other races. Seijin is more than willing to work with any being, as long as they can work with him, and keep peace. An example would be an Arrancar he had run into a few thousand years ago. Said Arrancar had a very different view on Humanity, and hadn't fed upon a single human soul, instead reaching it's peak of evolution through devouring Hollow souls. In the end Seijin befriended said Arrancar, simply because he was different, and refused to harm humans.

    Seijin is also a Master in most of the fields a Shinigami studies, though in some fields he has become known as a Grandmaster. This is due to both his immense lifespan, and his perfectionist mindset pushing him further and further into training the arts. As such Seijin is able to teach any and all members of the Gotei, and can adapt to command any division if needed.

    When it comes to battle Seijin is much colder, more calculating, and immensely calm. At least until his family is harmed. In his past Seijin has lost few Captains in battle, but when he had, it was as if Ares, the God of War, himself descended upon the battlefield.

Erida Seika

Erida Seika
NPC WIP




September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! XKK9eqP5GoI




*This is at primarily importance to me now, and some may know why... I finish Seji, if I have time.


    Name: Hyōryū-jū Xian
    Alias: Hyō-sama, the Cold Blade
    Age: Unknown, assumed to be 400+
    Age of Appearance: 20-26 years
    Gender: Male
    Race/Species: Shinigami-Demon Hybrid
    Character Alignment: It seems, that whatever suits to his family, is his alignment. By the power of Akairo-jū, he's been blessed with his rank, so Hyō naturally wants to give something in exchange.

Division: 2nd Division
Position: Captain

Personality: (What is your character like? How do they behave while in combat? Around others? When alone? Do they enjoy fighting? Are they a pacifist? Aim for at least 2-3 paragraphs here, us mods want to be able to get a feel for how your character would act, etc when we read the app.)


Role Suggestions: (Do you think this character would work best as an org leader? Maybe you feel it should only be used for social threads. Suggest what role you think would work best for the character here. Also place any other comments or suggestions for them such as what kind of powers they should have or anything else you think we should know.)

September NPC Jam! Gotei 13 Captains and Vice Captains! Rinnegan

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